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question by FMEE

FMEE asked 11/02/2009:

After a night of not sleeping and sitting in bed and I thought about wrighting a short story before trying to wright the story I have been thinking about, this is what I came up with.

The Photograph

One day, Barny was troubled and he asked God for help.

Barny: “God, I have a problem.”

God: “Yes, my son, how can I help you?”

Barny: “I want to give Wife, Betty a photograph of myself.”

God: “You have taken a few photographs of yourself already”

Barny: “Yes, God, I did but none of them look good to me because they do not show the emotion I want to show or what I think she will see.”

God: “Betty has a few photographs pictures of you already”

Barny: “Yes, but they are old and none of them are just me, and the ones that are just me are of before we ever meet. Because once we meet I wanted her by my side in every picture, so everyone could she how happy we made each other.”

God: “I think I see the problem here Barny. Would you like me help you?”

Barny: “Please god, would you take a photograph of me that shows Betty what she truly wants to see.”

God: “Are you sure, that is what you want?”

Barny: “Yes. Yes god I am sure.”

God: “Very well Barny, go to sleep and when you wake up Betty will find the photograph, which she wants.”

Barny: “Thank you God.”

The next morning Timmy awakes, with Tammy sitting on the floor.

Barny: “Good morning, my dear. What are you doing?”

Betty: “When I got out of bed I knocked over the pictures you did not put away last night, and they fell all over the floor and I started to pick them up.”

Barny: “Have you found any that you really liked?”

Betty: “It is a picture of Fred that I thought, we already gave him.”

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4 answers

henny cohn answered:

I know? thet u balive to much in god god halp only if we show him we disorve it

henny cohn answered:

I know? thet u balive to much in god god halp only if we show him we disorve it

INFP answered:

That u feel hurt somewhere and r familiar/more comfortable with the dark side of life.

planeteater answered:

it says you have a creative mind. I wrote a complete Mythology hand wrote it for 3 years and I absolutly love doing it. Its about 50 hand written pages