friendsforever asked 12/10/2009:
have a look on my poem and tell me if it is nice or not:today,when i hear your voice i began to cry..because of space i would die,i hope that i could see you baby..iam shy,of dreaming to hold you,in that time,the words stop at one point:i love you,my dear don’t let my heart down,iam singing for you dreaming for a better life that i could be with you just you and me in one heart,one life,sharing the same blood,i wish that i could stood and made you know;how much i miss you..you are my gift in this life you are my hope my happiness iam dreaming to be your wife,iam sure our dream will be true,in the near futur when the whoole world will be just for lovers,as you and me..(by the way my native language is arabic)
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friendsforever answered:
anyway i wrote something that nobody can write it because they are my own words wether iam 9 yrs old or 100 yrs old iam proud of my poem and i like it,ok
Josh answered:
Maybe you should write it in Arabic, then. No offense, but it looks like it was written by a 9-year-old.